
It’s hard to stay up when they keep knocking you down, It’s difficult to stay positive in a negative world, Your voice can’t be heard when you don’t make a sound, Want to be a grown woman but you’re just a little girl. Things could be better, but you don’t want to try, What doesn’t matter now were things you adored, Tears soak your pillow but you don’t know why, You had love and hope but you don’t anymore. “There is light at the end,” you have heard it said, The dawn follows darkness and so you wait, You convince yourself you’re not better off dead, Get up and get moving before it’s too late. Copyright © 2022 Brandon Ellrich
*Originally published on Medium
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Such a touching poem Brandon
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Thank you. 😊
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My pleasure
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This one hit me right in the feels, particularly that last stanza. I’m trying to help my teenage daughter through a deep period of depression and it’s so hard.
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I’m glad you were able to relate, but I’m sorry to hear what your daughter is going through. I know it’s difficult for a parent. You feel like there’s nothing you can do. Keep reminding her that you love her and encourage her to reach out to her friends.
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The despair and sadness are almost tangible.
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Oh, sorry my mistake. But the poem remains worthy of appraisal.
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No problem, and thank you, I appreciate that. I definitely have experience with depression, so I draw from that. Thanks for reading! 🙂
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Same here. I have a bipolar condition which includes periods of depression. That’s why your work was so recognizable to me. Keep healthy!
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Thanks, I try. And you too.
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