1/19/19
This poem was written in response to David’s W3 Prompt #32: Wea’ve Written Weekly on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, so please visit his page to read other responses.
The Day the Earth Stood Still (1/19/19)
The mountains crumbled The rain downpoured Levees overspilled Volcanoes rumbled Tsunamis roared The day the Earth stood still The sky grew dark Lava flowed Shrieks were loud and shrill The terror stark No sunlight showed The day the Earth stood still A state of shock When I got the call To find out he’d been killed A mental block Nothing at all The day the Earth stood still Copyright © 2022 Brandon Ellrich
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In connection with this poem, you may also want to read Joseph Oliver Ellrich.
Incredible writing
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Thanks a lot!
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you’re welcome!
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Very poignant poem Brandon
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Thank you, Sadje.
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You’re welcome
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Oh, Brandon, your poetry (including this piece) about your love’s death is so raw and moving.
❤
David
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Thank you. I don’t always intend to focus so much on death, but sometimes it just comes out that way. Thinking about significant dates, that one is most personal.
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I thought about using the date of my Papa’s death… so I totally get it.
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Terror Stark, No sunlight and the Earth stood – Indeed a terrifying vision. The poem is really good Brandon. It highlights the grim truth about where we are heading.
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Extremely moving, powerful and beautiful ❤️🌹
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Thank you very much.
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This is so well written. From ‘mountains crumbled’ to ‘mental block’, all the contradictory emotions loss triggers. Very powerful poem, Brandon.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate that. 🙂
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Excellent use of repetition and the honesty of the emotion is the cement that hold this poem together and causes it to be held fast in the mind and heart. Such a tragic loss…
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Thanks, I really appreciate that. 🙏
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You effectively contrast motion and noise with stillness to illustrate the emotions and reactions to a devastating loss.
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Thank you. Sometimes we feel such extremes because our emotions are so out of balance and don’t know where to go. I appreciate you reading and responding.
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I love that I found this poem on your site as well! Such an amazing piece of work!
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Thanks! Glad to see you made it!
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hi, Brandon! I just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by l’il ol’ me, is now live!
❤
David
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Thank you!
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🤗
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So very moving, Brandon.
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
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Thanks!
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Very haunting and moving.
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Thanks. 😔
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