A Poem

SUMMERTIME
Skin is sensing the scintillating sizzle of summer sun,
Under the umbrella of undulating nebulas above.
Meandering mothers mooing in meadows amid this,
Magnificent Missouri morning.
Even the ever-engaging Earth emits its energy, I,
Remain relaxed in rare respite.
Troubles take time to tarry,
If I invoke the eidolon ideal,
Master of motionless measure,
Ending in the easy ebony evening.
Copyright ยฉ 2023 Brandon Ellrich
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This was submitted in response to David’s W3 Prompt #52: Weaโve Writtenย Weekly on The Skeptic’s Kaddish so visit his page to read other responses.
*Originally published on Medium
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Brilliant Brandon! ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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Sorry, your message ended up in my spam folder for some reason. I just now saw it. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, Ken.
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No problem Brandon, that happens me sometimes as well! ๐๐
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I love this word, Brandon โค
And your poem is excellent!
Very cleverly rendered ๐
Much love,
David
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Thank you very much! I appreciate it.
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Brandon, please check your email; if you didn’t get anything from me, please contact me.
Thanks,
David
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Summer in a poem – just lovely๐๐
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Thank you!
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A fabulous poem, Brandon!
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Thanks a lot!
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You are welcome.
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Youโve already been told itโs clever, but it is, so I will tell you again. A wonderful array of sounds. (K)
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It’s still nice to hear it again, haha. I appreciate it. ๐
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Gorgeous imagery and sounds!
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Thanks a lot!
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Loved the alliteration (consonance) and you even snuck some assonance into the mix! So very clever to make it an acrostic!!
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Thank you! I appreciate it.
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I love this poem, Oh master of motionless measure ๐น
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Thank you!
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