This poem was written in response to W3 Prompt #34: Wea’ve Written Weekly on The Skeptic’s Kaddish, so please visit his page to read other responses.
Year
Over
Start again
This time better
Resolutions are not kept through the year
Either you will or you won't; don't promise
Resolve has faded
No commitment
I'll do it
Better
Now
Copyright © 2022 Brandon Ellrich
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Happy holidays and good wishes for the new year
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👏🏻 Brandon 👏🏻
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Thanks!
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Ain’t that the story of our lives! Well said.
Best wishes for 2023, Brandon.
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Thank you very much! Same to you.
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You are welcome and thank you.
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Yes, those promises are rarely kept long term. Just keep trying; “do it better now”. A timely and wise poem.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Happy Holidays! Brandon
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Thanks! Same to you.
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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL 🥺😭
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Thank you.
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I think it is right for you to say to make the year better than it was the previous year. Often we make resolutions and don’t keep them or are too far-fetched. Have a great, great New Year, Brandon. Wishing you much success and happiness in all you do.
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Thank you very much! I hope the same for you. I hope everyone in your family stays well.
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Thank you.
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It’s so hard to not make these empty promises to ourselves. I’ve found, for me, it’s far better to make a plan and have a general word as an intention for the year. This year it’s going to be balance. Balance in all things. It will be my mantra to strive for.
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Balance….that can be a difficult one. I hope you can achieve it or at least get close!
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I’ve gotten very off balance this year-allowing my body to suffer from too much time sitting and too many smacks. I need to find a way to be creative, care for my family and myself.
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Hi, Brandon 💖
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the lovely Paula Light, is now live:
Enjoy!
~David
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Thank you! I’ll have a look.
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🤗
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Good Poem
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Thank you!
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