A Shadorma

Humble Pie Is the best dessert Stuff your face Eat it up You can never have enough Be grateful for it Don’t be shy It surely won’t hurt Make some space Fill you up Sometimes this dish can be tough Be grateful and sit Copyright © 2022 Brandon Ellrich
This Shadorma poem was written in response to W3 Prompt #31: Wea’ve Written Weekly on the Skeptic’s Kaddish, so please visit his page to read other responses to this prompt.
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A reality of life. Well written Brandon
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Thank you!
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You’re most welcome
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Not what I was expecting, but I love it ❤ Great job =D 🙂
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Thanks!
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you’re welcome 🙂
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I like it, Brandon. Always a good idea to have it once in a while. 🙂
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Yes, I agree. Thanks!
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A unique take! I think humble pie has dropped off the menu of most… And I can think of a couple people who need to have a big helping! *applause* for a great poem!
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Thank you so much! And yes, I agree that many should eat it.
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I like how you turned this into a moral lesson, Brandon ❤
~David
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Thank you! I think humility is a very attractive feature in others.
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💯
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A humble pie is definitely a tasty, lip-smacking option, Brandon. Clever poem.
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Thank you!
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Ha – great take on the prompt 🙂
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Thanks!
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Brandon, just lettin’ you know that this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Britta, is now live:
Enjoy!
❤
David
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Thank you!
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*hug*
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