
This poem is in response to a writing prompt from Britta’s Blog, written for the Skeptic’s Kaddish Blog, so please visit each of them.
I saw the picture for this prompt, so I’d like to contribute:
My boyfriend’s favorite animal was the elephant. I don’t think I ever asked him why; it may be that they never forget, that they’re loyal, that they’re as big as the sky. They seem to have souls that are gentle and sweet,but if you cross them, be ready to retreat. Joe’s favorite animal was the elephant, and I wished I had asked him why. I thought I’d have the chance at a future date; I didn’t expect that he would die. Copyright © 2022 Brandon Ellrich
This, unfortunately, is a true story. If you got something out of this poem, please click the like button and leave a comment. Follow me if you’d like to receive updates on future posts when they are published.
Thank you for sharing this story, Brandon.
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Your welcome, and thank you for letting me participate.
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It’s good to have you on board!
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Thanks for being so honest with this touching story Brandon! 🙏😁
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Thank you for reading.
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A tragic story Brandon
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Yes, some days it is still difficult to deal with. Thank you for reading and commenting.
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I can understand
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Your last lines are so heartbreaking.
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Yes, they definitely are. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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A touching prose poem.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Ommigosh, Brandon – I… just… no words.
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David
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Thank you. I had no words at the time either. 😔
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Oh, this was so sad and sweet.
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I appreciate that. 🙂
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Hi, Brandon! I just want to let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted by the wonderful Aditi Sharma, is now live! Enjoy 🙂
❤
David
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Thanks! I’ll check it out.
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Brandon, thanks so much for your support of my story and the follow too. I will check your poems on the blogs mentioned. Have a great week.
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You are welcome. I hope you do well in the short story contest.
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Thank you so much. I just try sometimes:)
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