Always Believing,
Constantly Deceiving,
Ever, Forever, Grieving;
Holding Implications,
Just Knowing Lamentations,
Making Numerous Odd Provocations;
Questionable Reasons,
Sovereign Treason,
Understanding Valiance,
Waning Xistence,
Yet Zealous.
I would love some comments on this one. I’d especially like to know if anyone notices the … shall we say “theme”?
Brandon Ellrich, Writer/Author/Poet 
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Definitely beautiful!!
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Thank you very much! Did you catch the “theme”? No one has commented so far.
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Is it about an overzealous leader? From what I perceive, the poem talks about someone who is at odds with his own thinking. It is a juxtaposition of thoughts.
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It has a couple different meanings, but to see one of the themes, look at the first letter of each word.
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Ok, let me go back to the poem.
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I re-read that, Always, Constantly, Ever Holding, Just Making, Questionable, Sovereign Understanding, waning, Yet..(Zealous)
I hope I got it right:)
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Every word, not line.
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Okay, thank you, Brandon. The poem is an intricate one, and gorgeous.
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A, B, C, D, E, F, G….
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Ya, I got that just now:)
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I decided to try it as a challenge to myself. Of course, I had to improvise when it came to the letter X.
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Very clever!
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Thank you for saying so, and thank you for taking the time to appreciate and analyze it.
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Lovely composition with a deep meaning… very intelligently placed meaningful words in alphabetical order to expose a jealous self centered sympathy monger …
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Thank you! Wonderful analysis. I appreciate your thoughtfulness.
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This is nicely written and well done.
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Thank you very much! I’m glad you appreciated it.
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It’s not just the alphabetical order, it’s the choice of words to make us think. Its about contradicting ourselves in behaviour and the way we remain unaware.
Clever play with the alphabet. I have done this numerous times in my poetry books. It is a way of practising the language and learning.
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Thank you for appreciating it. That makes it worthwhile. š
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Lovely… would the intentions be enhanced if each of the beginning letters is bolded or italicized?…
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I could do that. I just didn’t want to make it TOO obvious. I guess it’s difficult to see it from an outside perspective when I’ve looked at it so many times. And thank you!
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I’m not sure if I can guess the theme, but it reminds me of my internal thought monologue, haha. Always a battle, always contradicting myself, and trying to be better!
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