I saw a woman walking, In the rain one day. She hadn’t an umbrella, As she went along her way. When the sun came out, I saw not hide nor hair, But when the sky turned gray, She was always there. I wondered at her actions, And so I asked her why. She said, “On rainy days, No one can see me cry. “I wanted for so long,” she said, “To speak, but never dared; Wanting not to be a burden, I thought that no one cared.” As we walked along, Our conversation grew. She shared with me her story, Until the sun shone through. She hardly even noticed, The sky o’erhead had brightened, And as she poured her soul, Her mood also had heightened. The next time that you see someone, Walking in the rain, They may need you to listen, To take away their pain. For all the hurt and heartache, Stored up over the years, Cannot be washed away, By raindrops or with tears. Not everyone may have, A sister or a mother. Show compassion for your neighbor; Be kind to one another.
Copyright © 2021 Brandon Ellrich
Very well written..truly amazing..
It’s includes love, compassion, trust, hope, humanity, respect, care and everything..
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Thanks. I’m happy that you appreciate it. ☺
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This was beautiful! Very meaningful.
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I appreciate that. I’m glad you got something out of it.
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Most welcome Brandon🙏🏻
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Thank you for this. I like the abab rhyme scheme and the emotion you put in this. Is this woman real or imaginary? Beautifully written my friend
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Thank you so much! She is part of me, I guess. I’ve thought about the concept of crying in the rain for a long while.
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It’s a liberating thing to do
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What a thoughtful poem. I love it. I love the rain.
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Thank you, I do too.
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You have a real talent and a compassionate heart, Brandon. Thanks for sharing both.
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Thank you. I appreciate that.
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Aww this is beautiful. Not quite relevant but it does remind me of this poem I wrote awhile ago, about a lonely ghost. 😊💜
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Thank you! 🙂
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